straytony huntertano, internets busiest music nerd here ladies and gents time for constructive criticism: -the biggest issue in this track is the voice tone inconsistency. pitch and speed in the lyrics goes up and goes down but the beat stays the same. some of your words can't match the meaning of the lyrics because they are at the same tone as the rest of the track. I don't think you pitch-corrected your lines, which isn't a good thing to do in records. lets say Eminem sang this song, it would sound better because his voice consistency is mostly lined up with the beat and the lyrics. -the lyrics are decent but half baked, considering the lack of flow in the transition between the hook and the verses. its alright, at least its not mumble rap. -the beat is straightforward without twists or raises, but im sure it will get better when you get a hold of the instrumentals. I'm feeling a strong 6 and a weak 7 on this track. also feeling potential, will look forward to your new tracks.
