As Catwoman once famously said, "A storm is coming, Mr. Wayne." Please check out the rap song I made and give me some feedback! If you like it, don't be afraid to leave a like on the video (no, really, please like the video if you like the song)! Appreciate it! EDIT: My rap name is AA Battery
okay well i'm not Massively in to rap but i can appreciate the time effort and work and style of it. i listen to all genres of music and have a very vast collection, so afew things i would say about this is and i'm not trying to insult you or put you down because i personally couldn't do what you did and it's an achievement in itself so good work man! Right so for me listening to this i would say Your flow isn't unique or special it seems very generic and robotic and its just words off a sheet with some bars and some punch lines(some got me to be like "oh damn!"), most rappers have a persona or a character if you will that they become and project into their work with their life and events they've been through, The pacing is all the same and just one constant stream and feels very long winded, there's no pauses really but atleast you are consistent, but your work doesn't feel like it has emotion in it or true burning passion because of like i said, you feel robotic ( i briefly skimmed some of your other videos) i feel like you need to step out of your shell and develope your own style, your own path and carve it up and own it. But with everything man, practice and practice, develope and grow and you'll reach new heights
Aight I'll be honest with you. I'm gonna be brutally honest here dude. This wasn't the best thing to put out. You started off with what every trap rapper would start with. Money, helping other but them not helping back, girls, how some are stupid, how you got a blazing hot chick now compared to your old chick, the list can go on and on. Start with some personal things like Eminem did after he came out of rehab when he released Cleaning Out My Closet, like NWA did when they released Fuck The Police when they were being oppressed and held down like they were nothing and speaking about what was happening around them rather than what they thought the public would want to here. You had some good lines but that's about it. Most people will sugar coat what they will say and tell you it's good. Hell my little brother in the car said that you did great when I'm hearing all this. Hope you enjoy the honesty for once as its rare to come by in this business.
Destiny you will be pleased to know that The Rain is actually just the intro song to a mixtape I've been writing. The mixtape is called The Nature of Man, and it's going to delve into very serious topics including being cheated on, dealing with my OCD/depression, and more. And last night I just wrote a single that is going to be a storytelling song. The night before that I wrote a song a lot like this one, but I've decided to release the storytelling song first. Trust me, if you like deep shit, this was just the intro. Hoping to release the storytelling song today. I won't spoil it, but the name is Stuck in Bed.
yea he rappin bout the rain , he needs a new brain(brain) all that waste of rhymes got his energy into a drain(drain) i sold that boy a skimpy sack of the cain(gang) yea i curse his name in vain(dayum) boy tried to run up to me but ended up getting sprained(aye) yuh, aye, yuh, aye,
